Friday, 25 July 2014
My Description about the ocean.
When I walk on the beach I could smell hot yummy chips. The first thing I could feel when I took my first step on the beach was the hot blazing sand cooking my feet. When I got in the water it was so cold that I ran back out. When I got back in I swam down and opened my eyes and saw the nice things that were under there for so long. There were so much amazing things that I haven't seen before in my life.
I could taste the salty water rushing into my mouth. My ears could hear the sound of waves crashing together, also I could hear the birds squawking as loud as a horn. When I was about to swim out all of a sudden I saw this beautiful coral that gleams like a firefly it was the most beautiful thing I've ever seen in my life.
Started waking in the cold water when I stepped on a great big shell, so I lifted up foot and saw all the blood dripping down my feet. I couldn't walk properly, so I just swam and finally I made it to the hot beach.I still could smell the hot yummy chips, so I decided to go and eat and it was so delicious that I ate some more.When I was about to leave I looked to my right and saw a bus, so I catched a ride on the bus.
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