Wednesday 3 July 2013

My Best Fiends



                  My Best Fiend

Brodie and Mehi and Etu are my best friends because they always stick up for me, and they always be right next to me when I needed them.Brodie is  a tall handsome Maori boy. He is cool because he is generous and always looks out for me.
Mehi is a tall skinny brown girl from the beautiful island of Tonga. She is as strong as hulk and is very bright too. She is funny and lovely to hang around with.
Etu is big and about medium height but is fat as a hippo. He has ears like a monkey and is strong as a ant and is Lazy as a turtle. But I still love him because he is a great friend and cousin.
Brodie, Mehi and Etu have different characteristics but they are all my closest and best friends and I enjoyed hanging around with them.


7 comments:

  1. Hi Brandon I really like reading about your best friend and how you describe them. You are really lucky to have such good best friends.

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  2. Hi Brandon I loved how you used smiles in your text.Next time check your work and make sure you but your full stop in.

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  3. Hey Brandon thank you because we are best friend and also well done for describing us with cool things and it made me laugh because you said that I am as fat as a hippo.

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  4. Brandon great work! I liked how you described your
    friend, you seem to know them well.

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  5. You spelt friends wrong...

    You spelt it fiends, I found what the definition was of this word..

    Fiends: an evil spirit or demon.

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  7. Abraham Burnley28 March 2015 at 13:50

    Helloo there Brandon,

    My name's Abraham Burnley, and might I say this post is remarkably still on your blog! What a great technique to use on your blog, to inform others on your "once" best friends.

    By best friends, I mean a certain one person in your descriptions of pals and maates.

    You know what I meean. Do yoou??

    -Abraham Burnley,
    Student of Gracepath Primary

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